请你根据下面的提纲,以“我的家乡”为题,写一篇100—120字的短文。
提纲:
(1) 家乡的地理位置;
(2) 解放前的情况;
(3) 解放后的变化;
(4) 对家乡的感情。
范文:
My Home Town
My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice.
But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life.
In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved.
I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.
对英语作文的典型错误进行分析既是检验汉译英水平的最佳方法,也是提高英语作文水平的最有效途径。在此充分展示一下错误分析的方法和作用。下面列举的学生译文收入了学生们在练习和考试中普遍出现的、具有代表性的英语错误。要仔细对照原文,努力挑出其中的错误,并且学会改正它们。
在这个过程中,可以做一件非常有用的事,就是把找出的错误分门别类,然后根据自己容易犯的错误类型,有针对性地进行深入的英语学习和写作训练。 翻译错误的出现不仅是因为水平有限,而且往往出于思维的惰性。把汉语原文的词语都变成英文词语,按一定顺序串成句子,确实已经让初学者费了不少脑筋。
这时尤其要认识到,写作过程远远没有结束。你还需要自问:词语是否译得恰当?要避免虚假对应;词语间搭配是否合适?要避免照搬汉语搭配;句子结构是否自然?要避免中式英文和翻译腔。