题目
如今微信(WeChat)走进了人们的生活,为大家带来了诸多便利,但有些人也随之成了“微信控”(WeChataholic),请你就此事写一篇文章。你的文章必须包括:对此现象的描述 你对“微信控”看法。
范文
In recent years,Wechat is becoming increasingly popular. Many people express themselves, exchange ideas and deliver information by Wechat.
There are a number of reasons for Wechat to be known. To begin with, Wechat is a relative cheap way of communication,which cuts down a great deal of the cost of making a phone call. Next,Wechat is to the taste of the majority of people. Its attractive interface and various functions are loved wildly. Furthermore, convenience also accounts for its popularity. It is available everywhere and at any time.
However, problems exist meanwhile. Firstly, our identity can be revealed when we use Wechat. As a result, we can be in trouble. Moreover, it may make communicating with others face to face less. To make the matter worse,relationship could break down. Last but not the least, our attention might be drawn too much to focus on study.
That’s all. There is no doubt that Wechat will improve as time goes by.
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